Here's today's post, amazingly on time and fairly long! Enjoy :)
3/5/10
Prompt: “The abyss seemed to never end, like a vacuum of cheesy-B-movie proportions.” (NaNo)
Jacquelyn stared down in front of her, at the chasm plunging down before her feet. The abyss seemed to never end, like a vacuum of cheesy-B-movie proportions. She took a step back, accidentally dislodging a couple pebbles. They tumbled down into the black void, bouncing off the walls as they continued the mad plunge. Jackie waited, but didn’t hear them hit bottom.
A shiver rippled down her spine. That was some 680 big hole, and she had to cross it. How, she had no idea. There was a fraying rope bridge spanning the chasm, but she didn’t trust it to hold her weight. Most of the planks were missing, and in some places, the rope was only holding together by solitary strands.
She eased her knapsack off her shoulders and set it on the ground, rifling through it to find her climbing gear. The gorge wasn’t extraordinarily wide, only about 15 or 20 feet. She had plenty of rope to span that distance, but the trick would be securing it on the other side.
Her gaze fell on the wooden stakes holding the ancient bridge in position. They would do nicely, provided she could get her rope around them. Forming a noose in one end, she spun it experimentally, testing the weight. She figured it would take two practice shots before she managed to successfully lasso the stake.
The first shot fell short by a good three feet, and the second overshot by another foot. Gritting her teeth, she let off the third toss, managing to slip the noose around the small post. She pulled it tight, making sure it was secure before tying off the other end on her side. Two swift strokes with her boot knife severed the decaying bridge, sending rotten slats tumbling down the chasm. Now her rope was the only method of crossing the gorge.
She fastened her clips securely to her harness, attaching the other end to the rope. It was lucky she’d thought to bring extra, as she’d need as much as she could get. Her second length was attached to the other post on her side, and she slowly eased herself off the edge of the cliff. She was harnessed securely to her side; in the event of a fall, she wouldn’t freefall to her death.
Slowly, cautiously, she began to hand-over-hand her way across the chasm, sweat beading on her brow with every passing second. At the middle of the expanse, she released the grip her right hand had on the rope, dangling only by the strength of one arm. Swiftly, almost desperately, she lobbed the noosed end of her final rope at the stake embedded in the ground on the far side of the gorge. It missed, slapping against the cliff wall and starting a lazy fall down into the inky depths. She cursed, gathering it back up with her free hand. She tried again, this time managing an awkward hit, the noose looped about the stake and a jaunty angle. Pulling it as tight as she dared, she regained her grip on the overhead rope and continued on, managing a few feet before the rope began to strain, dipping farther and farther downward.
Taking a deep breath, she released her hold on her lifeline, freefalling for a moment before the last rope caught her weight. She clung to it, falling in an arc and finally slamming against the cliff wall. She waited for a moment, catching her breath, before she began the slow rappel towards the top. It seemed eons, but she finally made it, letting her exhausted body collapse against the rocky earth.
Long moments dragged by as she caught her breath. Finally, she took her knapsack off her shoulders yet again and removed her flashlight. Gathering what she could salvage of her ropes, she replaced them in the sack and continued on, following the edge of the gorge, shining her light along the darkened expanse. Minutes passed, then an hour, and she suddenly espied something that caused her to drop to her knees, hysterical laughter bubbling up from a place deep inside her.
There, an mere hour’s walk from the site of her perilous crossing, hung a bridge, in perfect condition, suspended safely over the cavernous gorge. She continued to laugh, curling into a little ball to try and ease the cramps lancing through her abdomen. Her sides hurt, her stomach hurt, but she couldn’t stop laughing. She’d risked her life, and a perfectly safe crossing had been present, only a few miles away.
Now that would be a story to bring home.
Total Time: 20 minutes
Word Count: 766
Friday, March 5, 2010
Thursday, March 4, 2010
Finally!
Alrighty, folks! I'm finally completely caught up! Here's today's story, and tomorrow's will also be on time...no guarantees over the weekend, though.
3/4/10
“Morning bells shattered, and the tattered wallpaper applauded in earnest.”
Morning bells shattered, and the tattered wallpaper applauded in earnest. The ringing of the small bells sounded throughout the entire building, and gay laughter flooded the halls. Bright beams of sunlight bounced off the wallpaper, giving it a shimmering appearance, as if it was alive and celebrating. Rice showered down on the couple as they made their escape down the hallway and out the front door.
It hadn’t been a church wedding, but had instead been held in their living room, surrounded by family and friends. One of the relatives had brought the rice, but they weren’t sure who, and it really didn’t matter. What mattered was the joy resounding through the place, resonating through the very walls and floorboards. The house literally sang with the emotion, seeming to swell proudly as it watched the happy couple make a mad dash to their car.
As they pulled away, the tin cans attached to the rear bumper bounced and clattered along the asphalt, adding to the joyous cacophony of sounds. Cheered on by their well-wishers, the couple made their way to the airport, and their new life.
Total Time: 4 minutes
Word Count: 186
3/4/10
“Morning bells shattered, and the tattered wallpaper applauded in earnest.”
Morning bells shattered, and the tattered wallpaper applauded in earnest. The ringing of the small bells sounded throughout the entire building, and gay laughter flooded the halls. Bright beams of sunlight bounced off the wallpaper, giving it a shimmering appearance, as if it was alive and celebrating. Rice showered down on the couple as they made their escape down the hallway and out the front door.
It hadn’t been a church wedding, but had instead been held in their living room, surrounded by family and friends. One of the relatives had brought the rice, but they weren’t sure who, and it really didn’t matter. What mattered was the joy resounding through the place, resonating through the very walls and floorboards. The house literally sang with the emotion, seeming to swell proudly as it watched the happy couple make a mad dash to their car.
As they pulled away, the tin cans attached to the rear bumper bounced and clattered along the asphalt, adding to the joyous cacophony of sounds. Cheered on by their well-wishers, the couple made their way to the airport, and their new life.
Total Time: 4 minutes
Word Count: 186
Doubles
Here's another double post, the 2nd and 3rd. I'll get today's up soon, I promise :).
3/2/10
Prompt: "Do you know how to use one of these?" (NaNo)
"Do you know how to use one of these?" Jax asked skeptically, her brow raised. Daryn grinned cheekily.
"Of course I do!" He grinned again and punched the throttle, ratcheting the engines up higher as the ship lifted off, wobbling slightly as it threatened to stall.
"Daryn…" Jax’s voice was low, warning her friend. He just laughed and checked the altitude as he jacked the craft first one way, then the other. It rattled and hummed in an unsettling manner, and Jax finally shoved the younger boy out of the way. She plopped into the pilot’s seat, chuckling as Daryn landed on his rear on the hard deck floor.
With a slight twitch of her wrists, she sent the small craft into a sharp downward plunge, spiraling towards the planet’s surface. At the last possible second, she wrenched the controls, pulling out of the mad dive and soaring for the sky.
Laughter bubbled out of her as she glanced at Daryn’s white face.
"Now that," she said smugly, "is flying."
Total Time: 7 minutes
Word Count: 170
3/3/10
Prompt: "A pillar of sun filtered through the forsaken window." (NaNo)
The lot was silent. Nothing stirred except a faint breeze through the shell of the overgrown building. A pillar of sun filtered through the forsaken window, casting a mottled pattern on the dusty floorboards. No one had been to the house in many years. The glass that had once been clear and polished was broken, lying in ragged shards about the windowpane. The once-grand mahogany front door hung on rusty hinges, creaking wearily in the soft breeze. The house was old, old and alone, but not sad. Ivy creepers crawled up the clabbered siding, and morning glories bedecked the front porch. Woodland creatures had made it their home, squirrels nesting in the abandoned chimney, and a family of raccoons taking up residence in the large attic. Dormice scampered about the remains of the pantry, hoping to find scraps of food, left behind so many years ago.
It wasn’t a sad sight, despite its raggedness. It was simply an illustration of the passage of time, a picture of what happens as the years go by. Once, it had been a wondrous house, full of gaiety and laughter, and now it provided shelter to the creatures of the forest. Neither existence was better than the other, simply different, and the house would go through many more existences before its days were over.
The breeze wafted lazily in the soft summer sun, teasing the whiskers of the dormice, and ruffling the feathers of the swallows living in the gables. It was simply life, moving on and passing through, heedless of wind and weather, simply passing through.
Total Time: 7 minutes
Word Count: 263
3/2/10
Prompt: "Do you know how to use one of these?" (NaNo)
"Do you know how to use one of these?" Jax asked skeptically, her brow raised. Daryn grinned cheekily.
"Of course I do!" He grinned again and punched the throttle, ratcheting the engines up higher as the ship lifted off, wobbling slightly as it threatened to stall.
"Daryn…" Jax’s voice was low, warning her friend. He just laughed and checked the altitude as he jacked the craft first one way, then the other. It rattled and hummed in an unsettling manner, and Jax finally shoved the younger boy out of the way. She plopped into the pilot’s seat, chuckling as Daryn landed on his rear on the hard deck floor.
With a slight twitch of her wrists, she sent the small craft into a sharp downward plunge, spiraling towards the planet’s surface. At the last possible second, she wrenched the controls, pulling out of the mad dive and soaring for the sky.
Laughter bubbled out of her as she glanced at Daryn’s white face.
"Now that," she said smugly, "is flying."
Total Time: 7 minutes
Word Count: 170
3/3/10
Prompt: "A pillar of sun filtered through the forsaken window." (NaNo)
The lot was silent. Nothing stirred except a faint breeze through the shell of the overgrown building. A pillar of sun filtered through the forsaken window, casting a mottled pattern on the dusty floorboards. No one had been to the house in many years. The glass that had once been clear and polished was broken, lying in ragged shards about the windowpane. The once-grand mahogany front door hung on rusty hinges, creaking wearily in the soft breeze. The house was old, old and alone, but not sad. Ivy creepers crawled up the clabbered siding, and morning glories bedecked the front porch. Woodland creatures had made it their home, squirrels nesting in the abandoned chimney, and a family of raccoons taking up residence in the large attic. Dormice scampered about the remains of the pantry, hoping to find scraps of food, left behind so many years ago.
It wasn’t a sad sight, despite its raggedness. It was simply an illustration of the passage of time, a picture of what happens as the years go by. Once, it had been a wondrous house, full of gaiety and laughter, and now it provided shelter to the creatures of the forest. Neither existence was better than the other, simply different, and the house would go through many more existences before its days were over.
The breeze wafted lazily in the soft summer sun, teasing the whiskers of the dormice, and ruffling the feathers of the swallows living in the gables. It was simply life, moving on and passing through, heedless of wind and weather, simply passing through.
Total Time: 7 minutes
Word Count: 263
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
A Day Late, A [Story] Short
Well, here's yesterday's! I'll get today's up as soon as I can, but internet connection is spotty...and on a library computer, I can only put up what I have on my external harddrive--meaning yesterday's story. Anyway, the inspiration for this one comes from my younger brother, Isaac. He has this weird ability to shut everything out, every emotion, every person, everything. Anywho, here it is...
3/1/10
Prompt: "What the hell is wrong with you?!" (NaNo)
"What the hell is wrong with you?!" The voice was angry, livid. The calm gaze that stared back was the opposite, blank, detached. A fist was raised, pulled back, but it faltered under the power of that cool stare. It was unaffected by the rage directed at it, unaffected by the potential power of the fist. It remained studiously blank, completely disconnected from emotion.
That was the strength of the gaze. The ability to detach itself, the ability to pull away and shut down, shut out any outside influence, that was its power. And it was a frightening power, one that was capable of striking doubt into any oppressor’s heart.
The angry voice faded before the empty gaze, the fist dropping to its owner’s side. Footsteps stormed away, a door slammed, and still the gaze remained coolly blank. There was no emotion in it, no life, merely survival. And survive it would, for a long time, but would it live? Would the gaze find the strength to truly live? Or would it remain silent, detached, empty for eternity. It didn’t know, didn’t think, it merely willed itself to survive. Emotions were dangerous, and it couldn’t survive with them. So it remained, blank and cold, utilizing the only avenue open for its survival.
It would survive.
Total Time: 8 minutes
Word Count: 212
3/1/10
Prompt: "What the hell is wrong with you?!" (NaNo)
"What the hell is wrong with you?!" The voice was angry, livid. The calm gaze that stared back was the opposite, blank, detached. A fist was raised, pulled back, but it faltered under the power of that cool stare. It was unaffected by the rage directed at it, unaffected by the potential power of the fist. It remained studiously blank, completely disconnected from emotion.
That was the strength of the gaze. The ability to detach itself, the ability to pull away and shut down, shut out any outside influence, that was its power. And it was a frightening power, one that was capable of striking doubt into any oppressor’s heart.
The angry voice faded before the empty gaze, the fist dropping to its owner’s side. Footsteps stormed away, a door slammed, and still the gaze remained coolly blank. There was no emotion in it, no life, merely survival. And survive it would, for a long time, but would it live? Would the gaze find the strength to truly live? Or would it remain silent, detached, empty for eternity. It didn’t know, didn’t think, it merely willed itself to survive. Emotions were dangerous, and it couldn’t survive with them. So it remained, blank and cold, utilizing the only avenue open for its survival.
It would survive.
Total Time: 8 minutes
Word Count: 212
Monday, March 1, 2010
Last Two!
Another double...since there's only two left until we're caught up with February, I'll just put both of them up now. I really like the second one--it was a lot of fun to write such a crotchety character. Hope you enjoy them!
2/27/10
“As she watched, it began to whir and beep in a most unsettling way.”
Jayne tilted her head at the curious object. It just lay there, shiny and silver in the starlight. She bent down, poked it. Nothing happened. She took a step closer, poking it again. Still nothing. Crouching down on her haunches, she picked it up and looked it over. It was perfectly spherical, with no seams at all. She inspected it thoroughly, and noticed a darker circle, nearly indistinguishable in the dim light. She brushed her finger over, once, twice, trying to see what it was.
Suddenly, a brilliant white beam lanced out from the dark spot, nearly blinding her. She dropped it immediately and stepped back. As she watched, it began to whir and beep in a most unsettling way. Finally, it quieted, and the white light broadened, forming a solid square in the air. An image appeared, a head, with pale skin and a shock of tousled brown hair. A strange object sat on its head, blue, with silver shapes pinned on it in rows. Jayne took another step back, calling her companions to come look. They approached the object carefully, starting sharply when sounds began to emanate from the image. Jayne had no idea what they meant. After several more minutes of looking at the object, she lost interest, as did the rest of the herd. With a ululating howl, they loped off across the plains, their long fur shining in the light of their planet's three moons.
The stars shone down on the lonely object, sitting alone on the grassy knoll. Illuminated in the dim light were the words “Property of the United States government.”
Word Count: 268
2/28/10
“The cameras flash.”
The cameras flash. I hate cameras. They're bright and blinding, and they always catch me at just the wrong angle. You know the feeling? When you're just sitting there, and someone snaps a picture just as you open your mouth to say something, or just when that sneeze finally comes out, and there you are, immortalized with your eyes scrunched up and your hand covering your mouth. And yet, here I am, voluntarily exposing myself to these beasts of embarrassment. Why, you ask? Well, because apparently, I'm famous. I didn't really do anything, I just yanked that stupid kid out of the road before a truck squished him flatter than a pancake on Sunday. I didn't do any more than anyone else would have, and now they've stuck me in front of all these stupid cameras.
“How did you feel?” they ask me. How did I feel? I was pissed! I didn't want that brat getting squished like a bug right in front of my house! But I don't say that. I tell them that I didn't feel much at all, that I just did what I had to do to, what anyone would have done.
“So, what's it like to be a hero,” another asks. Well, it feels pretty damn shitty, that's the truth. Stupid reporters nosing into my life, finding out about the kitten I saved from the river maybe 10 years ago. Apparently I started being a hero way before now. But I don't say that. I just say that I don't really feel like a hero, I just did what anyone else would have done.
They don't get the message. I'm stuck there for hours, while they take their goddamned pictures, and ask me stupid questions. I pull my cardigan tighter. Damn reporters. They can go to hell for all I care. Stupid idiots, they'd probably bring the cameras with them.
Word Count: 315
2/27/10
“As she watched, it began to whir and beep in a most unsettling way.”
Jayne tilted her head at the curious object. It just lay there, shiny and silver in the starlight. She bent down, poked it. Nothing happened. She took a step closer, poking it again. Still nothing. Crouching down on her haunches, she picked it up and looked it over. It was perfectly spherical, with no seams at all. She inspected it thoroughly, and noticed a darker circle, nearly indistinguishable in the dim light. She brushed her finger over, once, twice, trying to see what it was.
Suddenly, a brilliant white beam lanced out from the dark spot, nearly blinding her. She dropped it immediately and stepped back. As she watched, it began to whir and beep in a most unsettling way. Finally, it quieted, and the white light broadened, forming a solid square in the air. An image appeared, a head, with pale skin and a shock of tousled brown hair. A strange object sat on its head, blue, with silver shapes pinned on it in rows. Jayne took another step back, calling her companions to come look. They approached the object carefully, starting sharply when sounds began to emanate from the image. Jayne had no idea what they meant. After several more minutes of looking at the object, she lost interest, as did the rest of the herd. With a ululating howl, they loped off across the plains, their long fur shining in the light of their planet's three moons.
The stars shone down on the lonely object, sitting alone on the grassy knoll. Illuminated in the dim light were the words “Property of the United States government.”
Word Count: 268
2/28/10
“The cameras flash.”
The cameras flash. I hate cameras. They're bright and blinding, and they always catch me at just the wrong angle. You know the feeling? When you're just sitting there, and someone snaps a picture just as you open your mouth to say something, or just when that sneeze finally comes out, and there you are, immortalized with your eyes scrunched up and your hand covering your mouth. And yet, here I am, voluntarily exposing myself to these beasts of embarrassment. Why, you ask? Well, because apparently, I'm famous. I didn't really do anything, I just yanked that stupid kid out of the road before a truck squished him flatter than a pancake on Sunday. I didn't do any more than anyone else would have, and now they've stuck me in front of all these stupid cameras.
“How did you feel?” they ask me. How did I feel? I was pissed! I didn't want that brat getting squished like a bug right in front of my house! But I don't say that. I tell them that I didn't feel much at all, that I just did what I had to do to, what anyone would have done.
“So, what's it like to be a hero,” another asks. Well, it feels pretty damn shitty, that's the truth. Stupid reporters nosing into my life, finding out about the kitten I saved from the river maybe 10 years ago. Apparently I started being a hero way before now. But I don't say that. I just say that I don't really feel like a hero, I just did what anyone else would have done.
They don't get the message. I'm stuck there for hours, while they take their goddamned pictures, and ask me stupid questions. I pull my cardigan tighter. Damn reporters. They can go to hell for all I care. Stupid idiots, they'd probably bring the cameras with them.
Word Count: 315
Here's a Shorty...
Since the first one is so short, I'll put two up with this post...
2/25/10
“For once, there was no chaos.”
The sharp crack echoed through the still air, leaving no doubt in his mind. The world began to tilt and blur, as if sliding off a steep precipice. The gun dropped from his slack fingers, and he felt himself crumple slowly to the ground. There were no thoughts, no regrets running through his mind. As he last shades of black covered his vision, he felt peace for the first time in his entire existence. For once, there was no chaos.
Word Count: 80
2/26/10
“The heavy drops pelted down, covering the windshield in a liquid haze.”
It was raining. The heavy drops pelted down, covering the windshield in a liquid haze. The wipers moved quickly, but they needed replacing. Swish swish squeak. Swish swish squeak. Jessica grimaced and turned the music up louder, needing to drown out the annoying squeak. She really needed to get Eric to fix that. Thin strains of music wafted from the blown out speakers. She frowned again. She definitely needed to get Eric to fix that.
Eric was good at fixing things, and he never complained while doing it. Jessica could ask him anything, and eventually he'd do it. That was the key, eventually. As much as Jess didn't like to admit it, Eric had a life of his own. He had a wife and daughter, which unfortunately took up most of his time. Jessica was only a customer, but she had a special place in her heart for him. Anytime she needed something fixed, all she had to do was bring it into the shop, and Eric would take care of it. Jessica knew he loved her. She knew that he didn't really care for his family, in fact, she was doing him a favor by going over there tonight. Eric was out of town on business, and his family was alone.
Jessica's car pulled into the driveway, and she got out, wrapping herself tightly in her wool coat. She rang the doorbell and Eric's wife answered. She knew Jessica, had met her before at the shop. They seemed to get along fine, but Jessica knew she hated her. No one really liked Jessica except Eric. He always listened, and never told her she was irritating, or worthless. Jessica smiled at his wife and lifted the gun.
The neighbors called 911 after they heard the shots, but Jessica didn't notice the sirens wailing down the street. The raindrops painted a silent smile on her lips as she thought of Eric. Yes, he would thank her for ridding his life of those burdens, and now he could start a new one, with her. After all, he did love her.
Word Count: 348
2/25/10
“For once, there was no chaos.”
The sharp crack echoed through the still air, leaving no doubt in his mind. The world began to tilt and blur, as if sliding off a steep precipice. The gun dropped from his slack fingers, and he felt himself crumple slowly to the ground. There were no thoughts, no regrets running through his mind. As he last shades of black covered his vision, he felt peace for the first time in his entire existence. For once, there was no chaos.
Word Count: 80
2/26/10
“The heavy drops pelted down, covering the windshield in a liquid haze.”
It was raining. The heavy drops pelted down, covering the windshield in a liquid haze. The wipers moved quickly, but they needed replacing. Swish swish squeak. Swish swish squeak. Jessica grimaced and turned the music up louder, needing to drown out the annoying squeak. She really needed to get Eric to fix that. Thin strains of music wafted from the blown out speakers. She frowned again. She definitely needed to get Eric to fix that.
Eric was good at fixing things, and he never complained while doing it. Jessica could ask him anything, and eventually he'd do it. That was the key, eventually. As much as Jess didn't like to admit it, Eric had a life of his own. He had a wife and daughter, which unfortunately took up most of his time. Jessica was only a customer, but she had a special place in her heart for him. Anytime she needed something fixed, all she had to do was bring it into the shop, and Eric would take care of it. Jessica knew he loved her. She knew that he didn't really care for his family, in fact, she was doing him a favor by going over there tonight. Eric was out of town on business, and his family was alone.
Jessica's car pulled into the driveway, and she got out, wrapping herself tightly in her wool coat. She rang the doorbell and Eric's wife answered. She knew Jessica, had met her before at the shop. They seemed to get along fine, but Jessica knew she hated her. No one really liked Jessica except Eric. He always listened, and never told her she was irritating, or worthless. Jessica smiled at his wife and lifted the gun.
The neighbors called 911 after they heard the shots, but Jessica didn't notice the sirens wailing down the street. The raindrops painted a silent smile on her lips as she thought of Eric. Yes, he would thank her for ridding his life of those burdens, and now he could start a new one, with her. After all, he did love her.
Word Count: 348
Moving on up...
2/24/10
“I’m not asking for your advice, I’m asking for your support!”
“Would you shut up already? I'm not asking for your advice, I'm asking for your support!” Karyn nearly screamed in frustration. Abigail, her older sister, just looked at her.
“Karyn,” she said calmly. “You need my advice. There's no way you're going to get away with this. It's foolhardy, impulsive, and just plain stupid. Mom and Dad will find out, and then you'll be sorry.”
Karyn scowled. “I came to you and told you what I was going to do, not what I wanted to do. You can't change my mind on this, I just wanted your support.”
Abigail tossed her perfect hair contemptuously. “Well, you can't have it.”
That was enough. It didn't take Karyn long to throw what she needed in a backpack and toss it in the trunk of her car. That was her plan anyway, she had just hoped that her big sister would help her pack. This wasn't how she'd dreamed of leaving home. She knew her parents would never let her go—they were very conservative, and extremely orthodox in their beliefs. Karyn hadn't dared tell them about her change in philosophy—to put it lightly, reason was not part of the family belief system.
She turned the key, hearing the familiar click as her car decided not to start. She shoved the clutch down harder and turned it again. Click. Once more, she pushed down on the clutch and turned the key, this time taking a deep breath as she did so. The car coughed to life, and she put it in gear, crawling out of the driveway, praying that she wouldn't stall halfway into the road.
Karyn had been driving a standard for about two weeks, and still hadn't gotten the hang of it all the way. She had come to the conclusion that a standard car was a lot like life—sometimes you had a really good teacher, and only stalled while you were learning, and sometimes you just kept stalling and stalling until you figured it out on your own. Karyn belonged to the latter group. No one had taught her about the basics of life—everyone just shoved religion down her throat and assumed that she'd figure the rest out on her own. And she had, at least some of it, but not in the way they'd expected. It was Abigail, the sister, who had gotten the life thing right, at least according to her parents. Abigail wore dresses, Karyn wore jeans; Abigail read the Bible, Karyn read Ann Rice and Christine Feehan; Abigail didn't have a computer, Karyn Facebooked and Twittered with the best of them; but most of all, Abigail was a virgin, Karyn was not.
She hadn't told her parents that little detail, but she assumed that they'd figured it out. After all, she'd been dropped off by her boyfriend many times around midnight...or later. She sighed and down-shifted as she pulled into another driveway. She smiled at the brown-haired man standing by a blue Chevy pickup. He was waiting for her. She hopped out of the car and gave him a weary hug. He knew without asking how the conversation with her sister had gone. He just smiled, and handed her a key.
“I haven't gone in yet. I wanted to do it with you.”
She smiled up at him, and together, they unlocked the door and walked into their new house.
Word Count: 567
“I’m not asking for your advice, I’m asking for your support!”
“Would you shut up already? I'm not asking for your advice, I'm asking for your support!” Karyn nearly screamed in frustration. Abigail, her older sister, just looked at her.
“Karyn,” she said calmly. “You need my advice. There's no way you're going to get away with this. It's foolhardy, impulsive, and just plain stupid. Mom and Dad will find out, and then you'll be sorry.”
Karyn scowled. “I came to you and told you what I was going to do, not what I wanted to do. You can't change my mind on this, I just wanted your support.”
Abigail tossed her perfect hair contemptuously. “Well, you can't have it.”
That was enough. It didn't take Karyn long to throw what she needed in a backpack and toss it in the trunk of her car. That was her plan anyway, she had just hoped that her big sister would help her pack. This wasn't how she'd dreamed of leaving home. She knew her parents would never let her go—they were very conservative, and extremely orthodox in their beliefs. Karyn hadn't dared tell them about her change in philosophy—to put it lightly, reason was not part of the family belief system.
She turned the key, hearing the familiar click as her car decided not to start. She shoved the clutch down harder and turned it again. Click. Once more, she pushed down on the clutch and turned the key, this time taking a deep breath as she did so. The car coughed to life, and she put it in gear, crawling out of the driveway, praying that she wouldn't stall halfway into the road.
Karyn had been driving a standard for about two weeks, and still hadn't gotten the hang of it all the way. She had come to the conclusion that a standard car was a lot like life—sometimes you had a really good teacher, and only stalled while you were learning, and sometimes you just kept stalling and stalling until you figured it out on your own. Karyn belonged to the latter group. No one had taught her about the basics of life—everyone just shoved religion down her throat and assumed that she'd figure the rest out on her own. And she had, at least some of it, but not in the way they'd expected. It was Abigail, the sister, who had gotten the life thing right, at least according to her parents. Abigail wore dresses, Karyn wore jeans; Abigail read the Bible, Karyn read Ann Rice and Christine Feehan; Abigail didn't have a computer, Karyn Facebooked and Twittered with the best of them; but most of all, Abigail was a virgin, Karyn was not.
She hadn't told her parents that little detail, but she assumed that they'd figured it out. After all, she'd been dropped off by her boyfriend many times around midnight...or later. She sighed and down-shifted as she pulled into another driveway. She smiled at the brown-haired man standing by a blue Chevy pickup. He was waiting for her. She hopped out of the car and gave him a weary hug. He knew without asking how the conversation with her sister had gone. He just smiled, and handed her a key.
“I haven't gone in yet. I wanted to do it with you.”
She smiled up at him, and together, they unlocked the door and walked into their new house.
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